Closing.

IMO, after looking at 25m parses from last night, and taking into consideration that he's only been playing WoW for about 5 months or so, I'd say that this guy has my vote. 

There are a couple things to work on, but they're mostly minor refinements...some of which should make your DPS shoot through the roof.

First, and I can't believe I'm saying this, I think I'd like to see your DoT uptime on parses come down a bit. Maybe. I looked at the Chimaeron fight (a good one to measure how a person's rotation comes into play). Here's the thing with DoT uptimes, they're so high (95-99%) I'm wondering if you're refreshing dots before the second to last tick has a chance to go off. This would actually be resulting in a DPS loss if you're using a global on a dot refresh where you could be using an incinerate instead. This fight may also be an anomoly...you're having to ensure your dots are up and the forced misses due to fight mechanics might be artificially inflating the degree to which you're reapplying dots.

If you look at parses aim to have your dot uptime at about what Watchesup's uptime is. He's almost always optimal...(dont' look at mine as they're usually low).

I'd still switch that haste gem in your pants to an int / haste gem. That will get you 20 more int at the expense of 20 haste. Even though you're aiming to raise haste in the long run, the extra int should provide a small dps increase.

I noticed that on the Chimaeron fight you used six globals on Fel Flame. That seems high to me given that you don't have the 4pc bonus yet. The only time you should be using FF is on unavoidable movement and then only after Corruption, Bane of Doom, and (hopefully) immolate are up, Conflag is on CD, and you don't have an instant SF proc...until you get the 4pc, you should basically really reduce the use of FF. 

I don't know if your infernal was on CD for your Chim kill, but if not you should be using it.

Another really big thing (and this could actually boost your DPS substantially) is your conflagrate usage. Watches got off 40 Conflagrates during that fight (2 misses). You got off 24 (4 misses). Your DPS should improve substantially if you're careful to be casting Conflag on CD...it's a really high priority spell and should only be waited on if you're casting SF, bane of doom, or (obviously) immolate. Hopefully though, you're timing your SF so that you can avoid a holdup on Conflag, and remember that you basically have a 15 second window in which to refresh Bane of doom and not lose any dps (refresh it when it has between 14 and 0 seconds remaining).

Finally, there's improved soul fire. Keeping up ISF is your number 1 priority. Watches parses showed about a 63% uptime on that buff for him, yours showed about a 36% uptime. Here's a visual:

Watches ISF was up at these points of the fight:

Hazze your uptime looked like this:

Looks like you didn't start off the fight with a soul burn and instant soulfire, which is how I usually begin, and it looks like Watches does as well.. There are reasons things fall off, I get that, but getting that one back up asap is important is it boosts your damage by 8% when it's up (which I'm sure you already know). Also, lest you think that I'm tossing stones in glass houses, I pulled this from one of my own parses:

It's not perfect either, but my uptime hovered around 85% for this fight. Think of it this way, about 50% percent more of my fight (approx. similar fight times) I was getting an extra 8% damage out of my dots, incinerates, conflagrates, chaos bolts, etc.

This post was very detailed, but that's because I'm excited to have you around. Keep learning and keep raiding with us. I'll mention that, not having talked with you in person, I don't know what you're like in vent or to chat with, but you do seem to follow directions well and that makes me happy.

Let's see if we can't get your DPS to come up by about 3-5k too.  ;)

"Till this guild disbands"

I Love the App would really like to see you in one of our runs....... Get some parses on you

I like your app, though im not a warlock so your talents and gear are gonna have to be pulled apart by someone else.  For raiding purposes, are you looking for a 10-man or a 25-man, or does it matter?  How variable is your work schedule? For instance, a waiter/ess might have a completely different schedule every week, but a desk jockey can pretty reliably forcast their schedule for months, with the exception of late nights and buisness trips.  DF weekday raids are evening raids.  Our 25-man is currently looking for a few DPS fill-ins.  6:30-9:30 m-w. Would that be an issue?